The Egyptian rose

1341 BCE

Chapter 13

"Mahu, please, let me help," Kamenwati begged again.

"You were one of the first to start trouble! You're not helping now!" Mahu answered angrily.

"Baruti, please," Kamenwati tried the other man.

"I can't help you this time. I need to find my wife!" Baruti shouted back.

All three men looked up when a fourth man entered the room. The sound of a heavy foot crossing the threshold echoed in their ears, stopping their quarrel immediately. When the man stood directly in front of all three, he eyed each in turn before speaking only to Mahu and ignoring the others' stares.

"Am I to understand the prisoner has a name for us?" he spoke very authoritatively.

"He has been evading us," Mahu concluded, back to his former chief of police stance.

"So tell us sir, what is the name of the leader of your group. Remember, a name for your freedom," the man asked Kamenwati, who mistakenly made eye contact with Baruti before he answered.

"His name is Khenti," Kamenwati replied, glancing back over to Nakhte, who was the one who demanded the name. "You'll find him at the tavern near the marketplace. It's where he sleeps at night."

"Kam, no!" Baruti shouted, knowing that's exactly where he had brought Meritaten, but told not one of these men standing in front of him. Even Mahu sighed slightly at the mention of his old childhood friend, knowing this all would end badly once Nakhte got his hands on him.

Satisfied with the reply as well as Baruti's outburst, Nakhte smiled and looked away towards the door. Before he could move to leave though, Baruti stepped in his path. His eyes glared at Nakhte, shooting daggers of anger in his direction. Mahu tried to calm him by placing his hands on his shoulders, but Baruti simply shrugged him off.

"What will you do to Khenti?" Baruti demanded.

"He will be taken care of. He has caused enough trouble for such a young boy!" Nakhte countered. "But let's be truthful, here. This isn't about your concern for the boy. You want to know where Kiya is," he smiled deviously.

Baruti tried not to flinch when he answered. "Shouldn't his father have a right to know what is going to happen to him?!"

"You're his father?" Nakhte laughed. "But you're barely two years older! That's impossible!"

"I'm not his father, but Kam is!" he shouted back, not catching a glimpse of the old man's stunned face.

"You're lying just to stall me and save them both!" Nakhte accused.

"Fine, don't believe me! But by killing one you stop them both from ever sharing the truth!" Baruti argued.

Nakhte stared at Kamenwati when he gave his reply. "You mean you had no idea?" When Kamenwati shook his head, Nakhte clapped his hands together excitedly. "Then this will be even better than I had expected!"

Nakhte stormed out of the room, leaving the others to stare after him. When he was gone though, Mahu turned to Baruti. "Why would you say such a thing? You're giving him more a reason to kill Khenti!"

"Because it's the truth! If Kam gave him Khenti's name, he might as well know the truth!" Baruti argued.

"He's my son?" Kamenwati interrupted their quarrel, causing both men to look over at him. He was still behind the cell bars but was grasping them as he made his shock known. "He's my son. But my son died a long time ago," he tried to reason.

Baruti walked over to the cell and faced the old man. "I'm sorry, but it's true. Khenti and his mother were crushed by the falling temple pillars, but somehow he survived. He has been under Ramla's watchful eye all these years."

"Ramla knew? But why would she withhold that information from me for so long? He's practically a grown man now!" Kamenwati said, looking down at the ground in disappointment.

"I guess she... look, I'm sorry, but I need to find my wife!" Baruti interrupted himself, knowing this whole night had gotten out of hand and the sun would be up soon.

"Your wife is with the Pharaoh," Mahu stated, realizing where Nakhte would have taken her.

"What? Where?"

"The North Palace. It's where all Pharaohs take their lesser wives," Mahu explained calmly.

Baruti addressed Kamenwati then. "I'm sorry about Khenti but I need to find Kiya before it's too late!"

Kamenwati nodded his response and painfully watched Baruti briskly walk away. Mahu looked over at the old man, sighed and quickly followed his friend out, knowing his service would be needed to get close to the Palace. If he knew Nakhte well enough, he would not have let Kiya go see the king without sampling for himself. Baruti's wife was first pointed out to the Pharaoh months before by Nakhte as they were walking the marketplace discussing the southern district and they had stopped to eye the merchandise. Nakhte had already advised the king that his six daughters would never do and that he needed to find a suitable wife to bear him a son. Kiya seemed like a most beautiful choice.

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"She's been missing all day. Should we try to find her again?" Ahmose whispered into the Queen's ear.

Nefertiti was seated in the garden, watching her other daughters playing, when she heard the whispered words. "She is a young girl who is desperately seeking her father's approval. Let her have her time away. She'll return when she needs to," she whispered in answer.

"Perhaps you are right," Ahmose replied, but his response was filled with skepticism.

"Ahmose, do you not think I am just as capable of tending to my children as my husband?" she demanded, turning around to look up at him behind her.

"I just feel that the king would have gone to look for her, that is all," he whimpered defensively.

"The king would also keep his own daughter under lock and key to prevent her from learning the truth!" she hissed.

"Does she know?" he gasped, a hand to his mouth in surprise.

"She must suspect by now. She's very inquisitive that one. It's just a shame it was her own father that go her into this mess," she replied all too harshly.

"Your highness?" he was taken aback by her sudden anger towards her husband.

"He blamed me for her," she sighed, not casting her eyes away from her other daughters. "He wanted a son so badly, he sent his first born daughter out to do his business and when she got hurt he blamed me."

"I had no idea," he replied.

"How could you have known? He had you doing his bidding as well—collecting peasants, merchants, even educated people because they refused his rules," she continued.

"He had good reason, though. Egypt has become a very prosperous place because of those rules."

"But at what expense? Ahmose, please tell me you don't believe Pharaoh would do these things for the greater good of Egypt?"

"I have always believed that whatever Pharaoh does, he does for all of Egypt as well."

Nefertiti laughed and looked back up to acknowledge him, taking her eyes off of her daughters briefly. "Please tell me you remember what it was like in Thebes? Those people—the people of Egypt—lost everything for the sake of the Pharaoh and his god!"

"You dare speak blasphemy against your king and your husband?!" he gasped, wide-eyed at her words.

Nefertiti stood up and at full length she was just an inch shorter than Ahmose at almost six feet tall. She glared at him straight in the eye before answering him. "You hold your tongue when you are addressing the Queen of Egypt!"

"Exactly, the Queen! You hold no power next to the Pharaoh except to be his Great Royal Wife! And just the same will all your daughters be!"

Nefertiti quickly glanced back at her daughters, still playing in the garden, unaware of their heated conversation. Ahmose moved closer behind her and whispered purposefully into her ear. "Come now, my Queen, did you really think your daughters would rule Egypt? Even now, as we speak, I'm sure the king has gone to the North Palace to produce himself a male heir, while you sit here watching the future Great Royal Wives of the Pharaohs!"

Nefertiti stood her ground. "Get out of my sight! Your presence here is unnecessary! Leave me!" she commanded, her tone overpowering her weakness for the time being.

Ahmose bowed his head in defeat and backed out of the gardens. Nefertiti watched him sternly until he was gone, then turned her attention back to her daughters. All five were still playing together, laughing, and not paying the least attention to her presence there. She sat down in her chair just as a tiny tear ran down her cheek, but she did not bother to wipe it away this time.

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A knock at the door caused both Meritaten and Amisi to jump. They were not expecting any visitors and Khenti certainly would not have knocked on his own door to come back inside. Looking at each other through scared eyes, Amisi instinctively grabbed Meritaten's hand, clutching it tightly to her side. The knock grew louder and more forceful and both girls looked on with wide eyes and the handle began to move. When the door finally flew open, Meritaten gasped in surprise.

"Where is he?" Nakhte demanded, standing in the doorway.

"Who are you looking for?" Meritaten asked, her voice shaking with fear.

"Where is the boy? Khenti!" Nakhte shouted.

"He's not here," Amisi replied, stating the obvious.

"Where did he go?"

"He... he stormed out," Meritaten said, not wanting to meet his glare.

"And you have no clue where he went?" he continued his interrogation. Both girls shook their heads in reply. "Good. Then it will be awhile before he tries to come find you!" He signaled to someone in the hallway and two officers came in. "Take them away! We'll leave a message for young Khenti that his two friends were taken in place of him!"

Meritaten and Amisi struggled under the powerful arms of the officers, but to no avail. They were quickly dragged from the room, kicking and screaming and bringing attention to themselves from every patron in the tavern. All conversation stopped as they stared at the girls being dragged away. Nakhte followed close behind and his glares sent everyone's eyes away from them as they exited the tavern.

"Isn't that...?" the tavern owner whispered to one patron seated at a table in the far corner.

With his head bowed low so as not to draw attention to himself, he replied in a low voice. "I'll take care of it as soon as they leave."

He lifted his head slightly to acknowledge the old man and caught Meritaten's eye. She struggled even more to free herself when she recognized it was Khenti who sat and watched without helping them at all. As soon as they were outside, he walked back into his room, picked up the note, and slammed his fist into the back of the door.

Khenti knew he was defeated. Everything he had been fighting for, for so long, was crumbling around him. The group wanted action, yet he only provided them with encouraging words; Baruti wanted friendship, yet he could not look him in the eye without feeling betrayed. He knew Amisi loved him yet he could not fully return that love; and when he tried to convince Meritaten of all the evil her father had done, she took it all for granted because she was too younger to understand.

He knew he had to bring Amisi and Meritaten back and he needed a much better plan than storming the all three Palaces to find them. This was the time he could have used Kamenwati's expertise in strategy but even he was out of reach. His father (although he still had a hard time dealing with that title) now sat in a jail cell waiting for his sentence because he tried so desperately to cling to the story that the king had taken everything away from him. For most of Khenti's eighteen years of life, Kamenwati was living under false pretense that his son was dead, not knowing that his son was alive and that he had no reason to fight against the king of Egypt.

As he sat there and read Nakhte's unpleasant note, he put things together and realized that the king had no intentions of killing his own people. The king, the Pharaoh of Egypt, had simply played into the hands of a much more powerful figure in the high Egyptian society. Looking down at the piece of papyrus in his hands, he re-read Nakhte's words, his mind screaming with anger and he finally understood how everything was falling into place:

Khenti,
I was coming to retrieve you to reunite you with your father who is
unconventionally sitting in a cell waiting for his sentence. Since
you were not here to celebrate this joyous union, we have taken
your two lovers to take your place. The king will be very upset to
know his daughter is a traitor but the other girl will make quite an
addition to his harem.
Signed,
The Royal Vizier—Nakhte


Khenti clenched his fist around the paper and slammed it down onto his desk. If Nakhte laid one hand on Amisi, he would make him pay for it with his life. Then he thought about Meritaten and how all of this was his fault. Her own father sent her right to him and instead of leading her to the information she sought, he led her right into the center of the protests, the chaos, and Nakhte's ultimate plan for power!
 

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